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People look at you and have no idea
The things you have seen, the hell
It's because you smile through it all
And they want the smile to be for them

I laugh as they try to get your attention
Stumbling over the lie they just invented
Hounding you from your car to the door
You politely smile, and offer warm thanks

They don't see it though how it hurts so
Never knowing their words destroy you
Words meant to flatter, defeat instead
It's not their fault, they don't know you

They don't know your heart is his alone
They don't know how he saved your life
They adore you from where they stand
But the you inside, hates to be adored

I can see it in your sad eyes, the disdain
These are not the men you want to see
And every second he is not here with you
You crumble, you stumble, you lose it
It's sad how sometimes just being nice can break something amazing.

This is for someone I know.
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Im at a loss for words so I'll just say wow.
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MurphMacM Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
Well I appreciate that! Thank you so much!
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:iconcuddleslut17:
CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime man
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
....
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MurphMacM Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012
punctuation !
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol XD that's how :wow: this is
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student Writer
I am impressed with this piece it has so much meaning. THank you!
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MurphMacM Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
Thank you so much for the compliment.
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student Writer
ur welcome friend
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RagDoll8877 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012   Writer
wow..... words fail me.
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